Va Va Voom avatar

What do you think of my rap?

Fri, Apr 27, 2012 at 8:28 PM By: Va Va Voom

I wrote it imagining something Nicki would rap; which is why I make references to Queens, Madonna, and Britney. The barbie thing has nothing to do with Nicki : by barbies, here, I don't mean Nicki or her Barbz. I mean the plastic, slutty-dressing side of barbies.
This is the first rap I've ever written, and Nicki inspired me to do so. I'm just a teenage white girl AND it's not finished yet, so please don't be too harsh. Still, be honest with me about what you think.
I don't usually use such language but keep in mind that this is written for Nicki :

So now I bet this bitch didn't see this coming
She better not flatter herself
I don't see no niggas coming
And when she out on the street
All of the niggas in heat
So near-sighted, she don't know that they lookin' at me
So now she wanna challenge me?
Ravage me like a savagery?
She can come close, but she know she could never damage me
If I'm an immune system
Then she must be the common cold
Bitch, I'll have you down in a week
And by then I'll be gold
Triple platinum I'm climbing
And you wish I was lying
Oh, I just may be implying
That your career be dying
When you see me with your manager
Manage her, manage her
Go out and save the hoe
'Cause the sight of me damages her
Why why why girl, why you so shy?
You go so strong in your raps but when you see me you cry?
I just want to party and forget this lie
Hey, I might even steal your man if he passes by
I need a shot a petrone, you need a shot of go home
Turn on my mixtape if you don't want to feel so alone
Do you want a tip on how to be a Nicki Ten?
Go home and play with your barbies and stop dressing like 'em
Oh
Is she a fake bitch? Is she a fake bitch?
Bitch so crusty Roman P. wouldn't even rape the bitch
Is she a fake bitch? Is she a fake bitch?
Bitch is so cheese I might have to grate the bitch

Bitch doesn't offend me with her nursery rhymes
Don't she know that she just wasting my time?
Bitch must have been abused
'Cause the bitch is confused
Still hasn't caught on
That her signing's a ruse
We laughing at her while she just throwing a fit
And meanwhile Madonna be bragging she wit
Me
Me
Might even have a scrap with Brit-ney
And while they have a scrap
(Scrap, scrap, scrap, scrap)
I'm putting Queens on the map
Oh
Damn

Replies to this posting

  1. DDF Danser avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, Apr 28, 2012 at 5:32 AM By: DDF Danser

    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?

  2. Va Va Voom avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, Apr 28, 2012 at 9:11 AM By: Va Va Voom

    MDEastwood wrote:
    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?


    Thanks! I wrote it without one, but I had the beat in my head.

  3. DDF Danser avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, Apr 28, 2012 at 10:54 AM By: DDF Danser

    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?


    Thanks! I wrote it without one, but I had the beat in my head.


    Wow, I'm inpressed :-) You can finde free instrumentals on the i-net, its makes it easy-er also *tip* its a good way tp practice whritting raps. Ik rap as wel so I know haha :) but I thinks you did it well ;)

  4. Va Va Voom avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, Apr 28, 2012 at 1:05 PM By: Va Va Voom

    MDEastwood wrote:
    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?


    Thanks! I wrote it without one, but I had the beat in my head.


    Wow, I'm inpressed :-) You can finde free instrumentals on the i-net, its makes it easy-er also *tip* its a good way tp practice whritting raps. Ik rap as wel so I know haha :) but I thinks you did it well ;)


    Thanks :) That means a lot.

  5. DDF Danser avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, Apr 28, 2012 at 4:18 PM By: DDF Danser

    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?


    Thanks! I wrote it without one, but I had the beat in my head.


    Wow, I'm inpressed :-) You can finde free instrumentals on the i-net, its makes it easy-er also *tip* its a good way tp practice whritting raps. Ik rap as wel so I know haha :) but I thinks you did it well ;)


    Thanks :) That means a lot.


    Your welcome, I remembers when I first whrote my first rap.. I strugled a lot becouse I did'nt had any experiece with instrumental beats and I had not learn how to whrite on my own. But now its no big deal for me.. and I don't mind giving tips and listen or read other people their raps. Its nice to see how creative people are.

  6. RICOMINATI avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, May 5, 2012 at 9:06 AM By: RICOMINATI

    Nice. :D For your first rap this is really good, and there's some parts that I could really picture Nicki saying. Lol Good job, you should keep it up. (:

  7. Va Va Voom avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sun, May 6, 2012 at 11:54 AM By: Va Va Voom

    Jayy Rico wrote:
    Nice. :D For your first rap this is really good, and there's some parts that I could really picture Nicki saying. Lol Good job, you should keep it up. (:


    Thank you so much! :)

  8. Jamon_Zolanski avatar

    Re: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, May 26, 2012 at 12:58 AM By: Jamon_Zolanski

    Impressive, great job....
    #AyoNicki

  9. QiraZalonskii avatar

    Re: What do you think of my rap?

    Tue, May 29, 2012 at 11:34 AM By: QiraZalonskii

    MDEastwood wrote:
    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?


    Thanks! I wrote it without one, but I had the beat in my head.


    Wow, I'm inpressed :-) You can finde free instrumentals on the i-net, its makes it easy-er also *tip* its a good way tp practice whritting raps. Ik rap as wel so I know haha :) but I thinks you did it well ;)


    Thanks :) That means a lot.


    Your welcome, I remembers when I first whrote my first rap.. I strugled a lot becouse I did'nt had any experiece with instrumental beats and I had not learn how to whrite on my own. But now its no big deal for me.. and I don't mind giving tips and listen or read other people their raps. Its nice to see how creative people are.

    i really liked it
    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh

  10. QiraZalonskii avatar

    Re: What do you think of my rap?

    Tue, May 29, 2012 at 11:36 AM By: QiraZalonskii

    QiraZalonskii wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    Va Va Voom wrote:
    MDEastwood wrote:
    For a first rap its not bad, did you whrite it on a beat or without?


    Thanks! I wrote it without one, but I had the beat in my head.


    Wow, I'm inpressed :-) You can finde free instrumentals on the i-net, its makes it easy-er also *tip* its a good way tp practice whritting raps. Ik rap as wel so I know haha :) but I thinks you did it well ;)

    i would imagin nicki sayin somethin like this this is good u shud have a beat to this and present it on youtube maybe if u tweet and hav epple retweet it nicki might see it and give u her opinion.... happened to alot of babrz....*smiles* TEAMMINAJ

    Thanks :) That means a lot.


    Your welcome, I remembers when I first whrote my first rap.. I strugled a lot becouse I did'nt had any experiece with instrumental beats and I had not learn how to whrite on my own. But now its no big deal for me.. and I don't mind giving tips and listen or read other people their raps. Its nice to see how creative people are.

    i really liked it
    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh


    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh

  11. QiraZalonskii avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Tue, May 29, 2012 at 11:38 AM By: QiraZalonskii

    i would imagin nicki sayin somethin like this this is good u shud have a beat to this and present it on youtube maybe if u tweet and havE pple retweet it nicki might see it and give u her opinion.... happened to alot of BARBZ....*smiles* TEAMMINAJ


    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh

  12. Va Va Voom avatar

    RE: What do you think of my rap?

    Sat, Jun 23, 2012 at 1:21 PM By: Va Va Voom

    Thanks both of you :)
    Maybe I'll put it on YouTube or something, I don't know.
    Been around the world, I still can't find, another girl that can steal my shine.