Va Va Voom avatar

I wrote another rap today!

Sat, Jun 23, 2012 at 2:29 PM By: Va Va Voom

Alright, so awhile ago I posted a rap that I wrote and I got some good feedback. Today I went on YouTube, found a pretty sick beat and wrote along to that. I wanted to write a single verse but I just kept going, so here's the result. Please note that this is the second rap I've ever written, ever and I wrote it in 20 minutes so it's a little rusty. Feel free to give suggestions on how it could be improved, though. I wrote this for Nicki to rap with somebody else (who would add their own verse that I didn't write) and I was channeling old school mixtape Nicki while I was writing. I know it ends abruptly but I thought it was kinda funny that way. Anyways, here it is, hope you like it!

[Spoken :
Oh
Yeah
It's collab time with Nicki Minaj
Eyo, let's take these bitches down one by one before they can see it coming, alright
I got bars that, you know, it's like they coming from another planet
I'm in the zone
And let's see if you can keep up, come on]
I wanna rap with you, you wanna rap with me
Then it's good, let's go and have a tea party
I wanna see if you can match this beat
Come on a sit with me, shut up and count to three!
Bitch you know I hit it right when I pull up to those streets
Got girls eying me like I just took they freedom of speech
And when we sleazing with the dealers we got the energy
Come on and mess with me
M-m-m-m-ess with me!
Oh
Sigh.
[Spoken : Eyo. Somebody better get the Harajuku Barbie her clutch. Chanel, not the crap them kissup radio hosts keep giving me. What. Who the fuck do they think I am? Lil Mama? Where is my clutch, SB? Yo, you know, I gotta grab something fast, 'cause these hands want to punch a bitch out right now. Gotta keep 'em busy, you know, I don't want to get arrested like that motherfucker Kimberly. Where the fuck's Barbie? Damn.]
Let out your anger, bitch, you know you wanna be playing
I'll just let you know when I'm done eradicating
'Cause bitch I'm not faking, this is how they made me
And it's funny 'cause I couldn't get higher ratings
Oh
Trust me, trust me, I've really counted my money
Maybe once or twice
I've got the bragging rights, honey
But a dumb bitch like you aint burdened, you can't count at all
How many baby daddies you got?
And how many of them called?
Ha, do yourself a favour; go buy your kid a Nicki Minaj doll
Oh wait, you couldn't afford a toy if you sold your soul!
Whoa, OK, calm down, I forgot, what was I rapping about before?
Oh yeah, about you and your lack of talent, whore!
If you wanna be competition
Hurry before my book hits the stores
Oh, Roman's back, bitch, and while I'm around you'll never be bored
And if Reloaded hasn't made you already scared
Then you better be prepared for the electric chair!
Yes, I'm filing my nail filer for when you cross the line
Bitch I'll take your eyes, before you can be surprised
And I'm backed up by Drake, 2 Chainz, Lil Wayne and Gucci Mane
They'll be laughing at your pain
While your head is on display!
Bitch.

Been around the world, I still can't find, another girl that can steal my shine.

Replies to this posting

  1. Va Va Voom avatar

    RE: I wrote another rap today!

    Fri, Jul 13, 2012 at 2:39 PM By: Va Va Voom

    No one? Okay :(
    Been around the world, I still can't find, another girl that can steal my shine.

  2. VintagePinkBarb avatar

    RE: I wrote another rap today!

    Sat, Jul 14, 2012 at 5:11 PM By: VintagePinkBarb

    Omg, you are talented!!!! :) keep it up Barb

  3. QiraZalonskii avatar

    RE: I wrote another rap today!

    Mon, Jul 16, 2012 at 10:27 AM By: QiraZalonskii

    you got skills ma.... here we go im finna add some if its okay...

    (talikng: yo ma u gettin back up barb... ha ha ha ha you betta tel dem bitchez)
    yo
    calm it down aint no need to frown
    bitches come around me they smiles turn upside down.
    fuck i look like givin these hoes some props
    chicks wont even get hyper from soda pop
    listen i back up my team
    bitchez get the business fuckin around wit me
    at least i get hands down for sexy bitch in the crew
    exscuse me, i took yo shine , you thru!
    ha ha ha i laugh at yo pain like you Kevin Hart
    i cant even imagin rappin this with out the kindness of my heart
    i break down yo career and tear you business apart
    Va Va gotta keep em busy u know
    while aour team take the stand O
    awww why the chick cryin
    you jealous cuz our team aint buyin
    girl bye with them fake azz tearz
    i'll call Ri-Ri some how
    and she can tell deze dumb hoes to take a bow
    (taking: yo Va Va Voom where de hell deze barbz at i know we aint ducked off ... ha ha ha i thin we gone get em with this one and oh SB hit up a chick)

    now bitches wanna follow my footsteps
    and i can see they old and bitter
    wanna come out with the new like me bitch stop it
    just follow me on twitter (@QiraZalonskii)
    a young thang like me got talent and a 21st century style
    Willow told you hoes dat bout a tear ago then from now
    yall neva listen you just get the outcome of No
    and thats why Miss Minaj commin out wit mo,
    i mean more history
    this aint no nursery ryhme like hickory dickory
    its the music like hip-hop thats slowly addicting me
    Nicki Got you hoez stomped and slayed
    i wish i can get my momment for lyfe and maybe
    i would get it one day
    "if it is to be, it is up to me"
    and i take the pride and beat these hoes fa free
    and i can be a headache so bring you tylenol
    like i said im so creative
    look at my miral on the wall
    i get it big and i got it raw*pauz*
    and you gonne love my flaws and alls
    and my flow can slice ya so bring some gauze
    yo,
    pick up yo life for i make em fall

    (singing)
    i dont know what you girls thinking bout me these days
    i just move wit my team
    and we get the most love and yes we dont play
    i got the dream of a lifetime
    and i just know one day im gone be high.. ooooh yea yea yea
    uh....
    and i can see it when i close my eyes
    i love my team to death till we ride or die
    im forever young
    mow look me in the eye.....uh

    *in chriss brown voice*im done



    lol i think i came oy so rusty but i konda like it... i appriciate it if this was okay... and yo ma keep it up i got loads of raps and songs i hope i can share em... read some of them in the lyric work shop or in my bloggs mmmmuuuaah!!! teamminaj
    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh

  4. Va Va Voom avatar

    RE: I wrote another rap today!

    Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 8:24 PM By: Va Va Voom

    QiraZalonskii wrote:
    you got skills ma.... here we go im finna add some if its okay...

    (talikng: yo ma u gettin back up barb... ha ha ha ha you betta tel dem bitchez)
    yo
    calm it down aint no need to frown
    bitches come around me they smiles turn upside down.
    fuck i look like givin these hoes some props
    chicks wont even get hyper from soda pop
    listen i back up my team
    bitchez get the business fuckin around wit me
    at least i get hands down for sexy bitch in the crew
    exscuse me, i took yo shine , you thru!
    ha ha ha i laugh at yo pain like you Kevin Hart
    i cant even imagin rappin this with out the kindness of my heart
    i break down yo career and tear you business apart
    Va Va gotta keep em busy u know
    while aour team take the stand O
    awww why the chick cryin
    you jealous cuz our team aint buyin
    girl bye with them fake azz tearz
    i'll call Ri-Ri some how
    and she can tell deze dumb hoes to take a bow
    (taking: yo Va Va Voom where de hell deze barbz at i know we aint ducked off ... ha ha ha i thin we gone get em with this one and oh SB hit up a chick)

    now bitches wanna follow my footsteps
    and i can see they old and bitter
    wanna come out with the new like me bitch stop it
    just follow me on twitter (@QiraZalonskii)
    a young thang like me got talent and a 21st century style
    Willow told you hoes dat bout a tear ago then from now
    yall neva listen you just get the outcome of No
    and thats why Miss Minaj commin out wit mo,
    i mean more history
    this aint no nursery ryhme like hickory dickory
    its the music like hip-hop thats slowly addicting me
    Nicki Got you hoez stomped and slayed
    i wish i can get my momment for lyfe and maybe
    i would get it one day
    "if it is to be, it is up to me"
    and i take the pride and beat these hoes fa free
    and i can be a headache so bring you tylenol
    like i said im so creative
    look at my miral on the wall
    i get it big and i got it raw*pauz*
    and you gonne love my flaws and alls
    and my flow can slice ya so bring some gauze
    yo,
    pick up yo life for i make em fall

    (singing)
    i dont know what you girls thinking bout me these days
    i just move wit my team
    and we get the most love and yes we dont play
    i got the dream of a lifetime
    and i just know one day im gone be high.. ooooh yea yea yea
    uh....
    and i can see it when i close my eyes
    i love my team to death till we ride or die
    im forever young
    mow look me in the eye.....uh

    *in chriss brown voice*im done



    lol i think i came oy so rusty but i konda like it... i appriciate it if this was okay... and yo ma keep it up i got loads of raps and songs i hope i can share em... read some of them in the lyric work shop or in my bloggs mmmmuuuaah!!! teamminaj
    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh


    Omg I love it! Keep up the good work :)

    Been around the world, I still can't find, another girl that can steal my shine.

  5. Va Va Voom avatar

    Re: I wrote another rap today!

    Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 8:24 PM By: Va Va Voom

    PinkGlitterBarb wrote:
    Omg, you are talented!!!! :) keep it up Barb


    Thanks so much! :D
    Been around the world, I still can't find, another girl that can steal my shine.

  6. QiraZalonskii avatar

    RE: I wrote another rap today!

    Fri, Jul 27, 2012 at 9:11 AM By: QiraZalonskii

    lol.... i try to rap i know i got the skills but im not so sure if the got the biggest ballz to present them but thankz barb for the compliment
    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh

  7. Va Va Voom avatar

    Re: I wrote another rap today!

    Sun, Jul 29, 2012 at 2:17 PM By: Va Va Voom

    QiraZalonskii wrote:
    lol.... i try to rap i know i got the skills but im not so sure if the got the biggest ballz to present them but thankz barb for the compliment
    x_2Di34Barbi3_x
    @x_2DI34BARBI3_X
    Qiraduhh
    Lashayduhh


    Same same.
    And it's no problem.
    Been around the world, I still can't find, another girl that can steal my shine.

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