andrea3000 avatar

LYRICS FOR FEEDBACK

Fri, Feb 22, 2013 at 4:21 PM By: andrea3000

NO IDEA OF RESPONSE THAT WILL COME OF THIS - HERE GOES:

Beep beep - click click - tweak then send.
Fast fire off and hit right back again.

A granade seranade - an ego on parade.
"Can you hear me now" - echo - cracked voice and fade.

I dial you thoroughly like a bar of soap.
Bubble bubble toil and trouble - lather up - then float.

Your words come back, then I go forth.
Ping pong - Duck dong - and fifths become fourths.

Your read does mislead, your talk dribbles out.
If all you do is drop bombs then why use your mouth.

Zero rock tossin at your glass house.
See - there's nothing inside when you go all out.

I submit, all legit, you forgit when to quit.
I don't give a shet if you slip - you can brush your teeth with it.

Know you don't know what to do with rapid-pace playback.
Still processing the verse flipped from way back.

Dont change even 1 vowel, not a consonant.
Paragraph marker double space CAPS confident.

Zero sugarcoating or false dream promotion.
Your one-dimensional style is a drop in my ocean.

A tsumani - upon me - to you - and out.
Riptide, down upside and turn about.

Think about it - multi-dimensional potential.
Not basic, boring or putting yourself central.

If you think more about what verse can do.
Then you'll appreciate it more when I text you.

Replies to this posting

  1. aliciab avatar

    Re: LYRICS FOR FEEDBACK

    Wed, Feb 27, 2013 at 12:28 PM By: aliciab

    I LIIIIIIIIKKKKKKKEEEE IT AND I KNOW TO YOU
    JUST MESSAGE LATER OKEY AND
    IN LIKEN IT
    IF YOU CAN COME DOWN TO TEMPLE , TEXAS OF A SHOW

    $$$BLACKQUEEN$$$

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