Tue, Aug 19, 2014 at 6:52 PM

You Gave Up (Poem)

By: Mimi26

I stayed strong ,I fought ,I came back with bruises and scars
You gave up ,

They went the extra mile on me they barely touched you ,they nearly killed me ,but

You gave up ,

I thought their words wouldn't affect you ,but that must of been a lie because ,
You gave u p,

It's hard to respect you any more you acted like a soldier but tell me ,

If you couldn't win the battle how can you win the war?

  1. Mimi26 avatar

    On Wed, Aug 20, 2014 at 5:12 PM, Mimi26 said:

    haha thank you

  2. Ciara Vann avatar

    On Wed, Aug 20, 2014 at 2:48 AM, Ciara Vann said:

    That's another great poem.

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